By the way, I would have taken the photo from a lower position where I'm looking at both of your faces from below. Would also get closer to the two of you so you would fill most of the frame. Another nice option would be a vertical photo.... On my camera I would take a very narrow aperture to make sure that both beautiful young ladies and the background would be sharp in the photo.
Usually I'm around somewhere with my Nikon (including the zoom lens it weighs over a kilo!) when somebody asks me to take their picture on a tiny digital camera. I'm not used to it, it doesn't feel right, no place for my fingers to grip, it's too light,.... You can't really expect a good result that way.